6 sentence's

L.I. Use 6 sentences to set up the structure of a narrative

We were all in class listening carefully to Mr Tom but Max was very  tired.We all sat at our desks as the sun shone through the window. I had never put my hand up before, I was too shy.Oh no, Mr Tom is going to  pick me to answer the question.I wanted to disappear and become invisible, I could feel little drops of tears coming out of my eyes. Yay, my friend Kitty put her hand up to answer the question. I was relieved that Mr Tom picked Kitty.

Today my group wrote 6 sentence stories to help us take risks with our writing. We did this by sharing our ideas and writing sentence that drop hints about what was happening in the picture we chose to write about. We helped each other by suggesting ideas to each other to make our stories more interesting.